These are four photos showing all of my teacher feedback, I
received a Level 4- but when looked at into more depth overall it was a level
3. I am extremely pleased with this because it was a rushed draft and I have a
lot of feedback in order to make adjustments in order to get into the top grade
boundary. To improve I need to make little changes, a main problem was spelling
errors and punctuation, and this made the magazine lack professionalism. All of
my improvements needed and feedback can be seen on the four photos I have
included with this post.
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