This is my final draft for my double page spread. I like the
colour scheme I have used because the black and white allow the blue to stand
out drastically which adds focus to pull quotes well. I have also underlined
the title of the pages in black, this makes the title seem more professional
which is what I intended. The overall lay out is quite conventional, it is
usual for a magazine to use an image with text by the side of it, however my
image hasn’t fitted how I intended which was a shame. I like the use of my
subheading because it introduces the article well which is what is often seen
in magazines.
I really like the image I have used the black and white is
affective because it keeps the overall look simplistic, for my main cover I might
think about having colour, but low contrast/brightness to keep it simplistic/neat.
I will try to get this kind of shot in a portrait view, this will allow me to
fill the whole half side of the page more accurately.
I like the use of pull quotes because they break the text up
and make the read of the article more interesting, for example a huge pile of
text can be quite hard and boring to read. Along with this the colour palette
has worked well for pull quotes, this is because it has allowed them to
significantly stand out in the article well.
I used Helvetica font, this font is sharp and easy to read,
however I will probably test different fonts for my final piece to find a
specific one that suits my magazine precisely. I made my title bold so people
can instantly see the name of the band clearly and have a better understanding
of what it is about, the sub heading adds to this as well.
For my final piece I will make a lot of improvements, for example
I will definitely put a lot more focus into the sizing of my image and the
amount of text I use, during this draft I didn’t put full effort into getting
the right sized image to fit the page perfect, therefore the page can be seen
to look pretty unprofessional, I would like my photo to cover half to page
fully, if not 2/3 but still leaving enough space for a decent amount of text
for my article. Furthermore I will make sure all of the article text boxes used
are level and the same width, this will allow for the professional look to be
enhanced.
Positive- The image looks good and the blue font works again, creating continuity throughout the magazine.
ReplyDeleteTo make it better- Try moving the text further in and adjusting the images position as it looks a bit cramped on the left.
Positive - The colour scheme which has been used is very eye catchy. The bold lines under bits of text also grabs the readers attention.
ReplyDeleteNegative - There could be more text used on the page as there is quite a lot of free space on that area.