Update: Models

I will be changing one of my models from my original three draft models. I am doing this because my new model is more suitable for the genre itself which is ideal for me when taking my final photos next week. 

Update Post

Since recieving feedback from Mr Ford and Ms Sizer on my first draft I have progressed a lot, during this time I have

• Made a media playlist.
• Created an audience feedback questionnaire and got answers.
• Done peer audience feedback from comments on my blog including positives/negatives.
• Done 1st Draft teacher feedback and stated what i will be changing and what went well.
• Created updated drafts on the improvements i received from teachers and what i think.
• Created a second updated draft with further tweaks and improvements/changes.

From now i will be:

• Getting new and improved photos of my models in various amounts of different settings and different shots to find perfect photos for my magazine.
• Improve my drafts to create my final pieces, most tweaks will be making sure everything is in line perfectly.
• Look at more magazine inspirations for my final piece to find out an overall look i could use.
• Completely finishing my final piece.

2nd Updated Draft (Further Feedback)

These are further improvements for a second updated draft. I decided to do a second to use a range of different ideas and see how they work. For example on the contents page i have made it look more professional by ending the page level with a plain black line, i believe it also looks more simplstic and conventional. Along with this i have also took away the sub paragraph on my double page spread and included it at the beginning of my article, I'm unsure wether this looks better, however it does make my article look longer which is what was intended. Also i need to add paragraphs into my article.